I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about control diet.

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I am looking for a skilled article writer to write up essay about my patent.
I have invention and I have been registed this patent in USPTO.
An essay about a new invention to control someone diet.
You should include these ideas:
• The importance of maintaining the number of calories consumed.
• It is difficult to prevent yourself from enjoying himself with food.
• Introducing the new invention to readers.
• How the new invention works.
• Advantages of new invention.
• The last paragraph: encourages readers to use this invention.
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((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))

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  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 1 Tag zuvor

    Hey please wait for me. I will submit. Thank you

    • 1 Tag zuvor
  • pdeb85
    pdeb85
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    Hello! Please check my essay, entry number 10, and give feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 Woche zuvor
    1. naefcom
      Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      could you read my feedback to Ailine M.
      I want everyone to talk about a perfect body and its importance not just about obesity
      also.
      you have putted some pictures together, and the pictures size too big and all pictures in the same position in the paper.
      you have putted headlines in same position in the paper.
      but l like your words about advantages and about encourage readers to use this invention.

      • 1 Woche zuvor
    2. pdeb85
      pdeb85
      • 2 Tage zuvor

      Hello! Please check my revised essay, entry number #17 . I have rewritten it according to your feedback. Thank you!

      • 2 Tage zuvor
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 5 Tage zuvor

    Please check #13 with my adjustments

    • 5 Tage zuvor
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    No, problem. Thanks for the feedback- it enables me to make the adjustments you want.

    • 1 Woche zuvor
  • Estadler
    Estadler
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    Hi, Please check my essay and leave feedback. Thank you!

    • 1 Woche zuvor
    1. naefcom
      Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      Good work.
      could you read my feedback to Pratyush D.
      I like your essay because it's a brief but you need to put some headlines and arrange the paragraph carefully.
      you have putted all pictures nearby to each other.
      and you should put the last paragraph at the end.

      • 1 Woche zuvor
  • naefcom
    Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    thank you so much Marius.
    fantastic essay.

    • 1 Woche zuvor
    1. naefcom
      Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      I want some modification in your article:

      you just talk about obesity and the Diseases associated with obesity, could you add a paragraph talk about a perfect body and its importance for a beauty appearance and success in the life.

      In the paragraph 6: you have wrote ( a simple plastic food page) but the device will be made of paper and wood materials. ((The hinge mechanism may be from plastic materials or it may be preferred to make the hinge mechanism from paper material to be biodegradable. Biodegradable is the preferred so that it may be used as fertilizer for plants like used coffee grounds at coffee shops.))

      • 1 Woche zuvor
    2. MariusAlza9
      MariusAlza9
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      Sure, please check my new submission to see the required modifications! Thank your feedback!

      • 1 Woche zuvor
  • ailinemacabuhay
    ailinemacabuhay
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    Hi there, please do check mine, and am willing to revise if necessary.

    • 1 Woche zuvor
    1. naefcom
      Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      l liked that You have used the question to grab the reader attention at the beginning and at the end.

      could you add a pictures and puts headlines and font on your article.

      In the paragraph 2 and 3 you have just talk about obesity and how its happened but you did not mention anything about keep body fit.

      In the paragraph 5 and 7 you have used the word (cheat) and I prefer a positive expression.

      You have wrote a lot about appearance and a few about how the device work.

      in the last paragraph you need to rephrase the sentence and increase sentence to encourage the readers to use this invention.

      • 1 Woche zuvor
  • naefcom
    Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    I will put all my feedback in public to avoid these from future writers....

    • 1 Woche zuvor
  • zaynraza49
    zaynraza49
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    Check Entry 8 please. Feedback will be appreciated.

    • 1 Woche zuvor
  • naefcom
    Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
    • 1 Woche zuvor

    I am waiting more entries until the contest finish.

    • 1 Woche zuvor
  • ashikur199660
    ashikur199660
    • 2 Wochen zuvor

    Asslamau alaikum please wait for me.

    • 2 Wochen zuvor
    1. naefcom
      Wettbewerbs-Inhaber
      • 1 Woche zuvor

      ok

      • 1 Woche zuvor

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