Hi There, I would like to help you out with your LinkedIn bio. I have worked as an executive PA in the UK for over 8 years and have in that time written a lot of high level biographies for clients across many different platforms including LinkedIn.
If you want me to work on this for you would need you to provide me with a few things:
Firstly I have 3 questions about your audience
• Who do you want to reach with your summary? Who is your ideal audience?
• What do you want them to learn or do?
• How do you want them to feel?
Then 6 Questions about your content...
1. Your most important accomplishments. EG. (EMPLOYEE OF THE YEAR 2015)
2. Your values and passions (e.g punctuality makes the world go round, sports fanatic)
3. Your superpowers (What can you do better than anyone else? )
4. Fact, figures and stats. (a few interesting points that are quantifiable. Eg Top of your class in business 101, or ran 12 marathons, etc)
5. Differentiation. (What sets you apart from the crowd?)
6. External validation. (Do you have anyone who can give you an endorsement?)
Once I have as much of this as you can provide I will use this information to write you a really punchy bio.
Let me know if you have any further questions