Here is the sample that I rewrote from the text:
Original: Whether your clients keep them in a wallet, place them in a business card holder, or stick them in a desk drawer for later use is not important. The point is they do keep them. If they are a uniquely designed item with a good piece of art the, likelihood of them keeping them goes up. If they are placed in a track in their place of business with other business cards, the design of your card may help it stick out from the crowd as well.
Re-write: It is not important whether your clients keep them in their wallets, their business card holders, or in a drawer for later use. The point is they do keep them. If they are uniquely designed with some clever art, they have a higher chance of being kept. Moreover, if they are jumbled in a rack with various other business cards, a good design may help your card stand out from the crowd.
I can do this at a rate of $0.03 per word, which is approximately $90 for the whole project. I can complete this project before the coming weekend (6pm GMT on Friday 1st July 2011)