Hello,
I'd like to proofread and critique the first chapter of your novel FOR FREE to show you what I can do. No strings attached.
My name is Jeremy Hawkins. I am founder and lead editor of The Distillery, a U.S.-based editing service for creative projects. I am new to Freelancer, so I am bidding this and other projects VERY low in the hopes of winning initial clients. You'll certainly get your money's worth with me.
I have an MFA in creative writing (fiction) and I have been a professional editor for two years. In that time I've worked on dozens of novels. I pride myself on being fun to work with, and my real passion is for creative critique, story building, etc.
Please consider my offer. What have you got to lose?
All best,
Jeremy Hawkins
Founder/Lead Editor
The Distillery: Editing Services