An artwork for the kinematics of my game.

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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  After voting we decided on the winner, between Sherman and Elian, and it is Elian who wins the contest.
  For 2 votes against 1 of our team.
  (There are 3 of us so perfect for sharing)
  
  Thanks to everyone who participated in the competition, we weren't expecting such a tight finish.
  
  As I said earlier the points for choosing the winner were quite subjective because the syles were very different (and it remains art) so not sure that it helps artists to talk about it.
  
  Thank you again and have a nice day.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     publishinggurus

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     I could not read your message before you rejected it. I understand you need 2d illustration, but I can create much better rendering with 3D. I will complete the project and show you. If you still need it for future game illustrations, you can use those.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  We are going to vote to decide between the two 5-star entrances tomorrow.
  
  Concretely each of the two could have won the competition, they each have a different style that can stick to what we want.
  
  So we are going to vote between us and have to choose a winner (we are waiting for the return of one of our team this weekend), but this time it may be really subjective as the two works have strong points in each aspect.
  
  (For example, we prefer Sherman's monsters but Elian's city.
  
  In any case the two people will be added to our repertoire for future work because very impressive.
  
  I hope that the loser will not be too disappointed: /.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     elialex

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Thank you for your comments and attention my friend. I really put the monsters in large numbers and small to imply that the city is large, but no creature looks close and in detail since I did not know how evil and terrifying it should be. I am open to do it. Regards!

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  I rejected the "empty" participation to avoid the flood but took part in your participation.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  EVINR

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  hi please do not close until the end

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     No problem, I'm fine, I leave until the deadline.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Brief end on this image you can especially see the 4 wall that goes towards the main tower is those that are missing from your current image so that it matches (almost ready) to the already existing series.
  
  Sorry for forgetting: /

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  1. 
     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     The 4 walls start from the surrounding wall, divide by 4 the civil buildings and go up to the tower, basically the solda can easily make it from the walkway from the surrounding wall to the tower.
     
     And yes the buildings in the second wall are not represented on image 4 or your incomprehenssion but I want them beautiful and well on this image. (it is a forgetting of +)

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     elialex

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     I understand, so the walls would be diagonal to the 4 main doors? something like if the doors formed a + (north south east and west) and the x-shaped walls (diagonal to the doors)

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  As for all the others I will give a feedback to Shernan Gomer C M.
  
  So, first of all great designs.
  There are some great ideas, including the sublime giant worms and the statues which are truly magnificent.
  I noticed the magic signs next to the crystal which make the image very good.
  However, I'm not a big fan of walls that seem far too thin to serve as a walkway, however I loved the idea of ​​putting walkways that lead from one wall to the other as you did .
  Regarding the effect of the seats, I prefer to see orders of the creat
  Otherwise at the RP level, the walls of light are indestructible by the creatures that besiege the city. To spoil the rest of the story, their chief in person will have to point to destroy the crystal that will make the dome fall later. So cracks are unfortunately impossible at this level of history.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
  1. 
     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     The spelling correction hit again, what I wanted to say is that I prefer to see a multitude of monsters massed at the end of the shield than roots even if it is not a bad idea I want to show that the monsters are countless and given a impression of an impossible victory for the defenders.
     And sorry for your internet problem.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Eccaia

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Hello! have you chosen the winner yet? Or is there still an opportunity to make an art for your contest? :)

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     You can still but the level starts to be very high and there is very little time left

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

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  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  So to show you in more detail I link a picture 4 which is a slightly less zoomed view of the sky of the city.
  This image is located chronologically a few hours after the one you made, at this time the crystal of the tower has been destroyed the dome of light it is therefore disintegrated and corruption and horde of monsters invade the city.
  All the little lights that you can see represent the soldiers who still fight to defend the city, (the humans of this mount all emit a light from their skin which makes them bright in the dark).

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  /! \ Small urgent cleaning, I learned that the plan I had provided (picture 2) did not correspond perfectly to a certain image already present in the series.
  
  I completely forgot to display the 4 walls which connect the surrounding walls to the second up to the main tower.
  In real time, this would not be important, but since the images at the end of the cutscene have already been taken, there is a risk of creating a visual inconsistency in the cutscene.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

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  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  So, I updated the classification by modifying the notes according to the last work presented as well as the modifications.
  
  I also want to point out that as of now all the works which will be above 3 stars would have been able for us (me and my colleagues) to win this contest, we will have to decide on fairly subjective opinions because we also vote on our side so for those who will not win don't be too disappointed.
  
  We note each no to this step for possible future work because we believe that you all have a very good level.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  elialex

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  I uploaded the new image #10 with more details about the walls and the sentries in the watchtowers. I hope you like it.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  elialex

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Hello! I just uploaded my illustration, #8 . I hope you like it, I am attentive to the changes you suggest.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Super, you go in first place for the moment, we see that you have taken note of the reviews of others to make your picture I appreciate it very much. The shield is rather successful as well as the corruption with the tentacles and the monsters. Your city as for it is well proportioned and this approximates fairly well to my global vision.
     
     I will give you feedback like the others:
     
     To consolidate your position, you could add details such as sentries on the wall to give a little more depth to the siege scene that the city experiences.
     The surrounding wall seems a little flat if not surely a lack of shade I imagine.
     
     Here is.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     elialex

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     thank you for your comments, my friend. I will make the corrections and upload them soon :)

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  publishinggurus

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  I can create the whole thing in 3D if you want. Please check my portfolio. This way you can have different views for the game.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Ah and good luck for those who have not yet posted as for those in the race.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  For Mia J
  Uh this time I don't really know what to say, the image is nice but very different from the level I expect for the work you can help yourself with the models of others and other comments that I made above if you want me proposed a new version but this one does not correspond enough to what I am looking for although I note the efforts sorry.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  For Renan L.
  So it's really a shame because unfortunately I don't like the style used.
  It is all the more unfortunate because you are the person who most understood the vision I had of the city and its surroundings, that it is the city the monsters crowded with the tentacles of corruption the aoe area of ​​the crystal the proportions of the city, everything is respected even the fact that the tentacle this desintegre in contact with the bubble and shows that the light repels them is exellent, but unfortunately this is not the style I want for my kinematics, really sorry but at the moment I cannot rate you above.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  2. For Sergey A:
  I find the city well done, the building is beautiful, the style is pretty cool, play well To improve the image it would be necessary to review the colors of the crystal and the barrier, actually I am looking for a purity effect which would denote completely with the effect of corruption and the monste that are outside the bubble. Otherwise as for the person before you, the note could be improved by giving more detail and life than it is by putting monsters and coruption near the dome or sentries on the walls. The light effects are nice but hides a little too the city which is shame given that the design is beautiful.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  1. For Antonija V:
  I really like the color scheme that you use for your image the city is well represented and the style is also suitable, it would just lack a little more detail and a slight change in the shield, which is about 100 to 200 meters more far away from the surrounding wall.
  If not to improve still more there could be more detail so that one feels more that the city is under state of seats, like creature on the surroundings, the coruption at the edge of the dome d elumiere of the soldier on the ramparts ...

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  /! \ As agreed I will make my first feedbacks, you are free to modify your work or leave it as it is according to the time that you estimate to put in the work. Do not hesitate to read the reviews of other participants if you want even more details to improve your pictures.
  
  I would like to remind you that this is a contest, so I would have to decide (me and my colleagues) on the winner even if several of you deserve to win.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  elialex

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  I have the sketch ready, i don't know if uploading it gives you an idea of ​​what I will do. anyway i will work on the rendering :)

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     I look forward to it

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  [Info] I will make my first feedback on the first artwork tomorrow evening if you still want to improve your work to increase your chances [\info]

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     byteAbug

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Hi, I'm still busy with mine

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Ok :)

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  elialex

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  What color would you like to see the barrier?

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     A kind of white / yellow radiation of light.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  Teeth33

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Hi, i have few questions. - what resolution of the picture do you need? (mostly interested proportions - it need to be square or rectangular). Second question about mood of the illustration, it will be happy future or sad, or horror. Also I see stylistic of the 'picture 2'. It's a bit cartoonish. Does that mean that cartoon style fits to your project, or you prefer more realistically style like on the 'picture 3'

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     For resolution like picture 2 so 976x544 and rather rectangular.
     For the second question, let's say that at the time of this image the shield still protects the city but is still besieged, these inhabitants therefore sound in a context of tension but still still contained. The light of the shield destroys the monsters in contact so they are all packed in these surroundings. The future is going to be much simpler but I don't think that was the bottom of your question.
     
     It is on that it is mizu if the style corresponds to image 2 and does not create a shock of the passage from one style to another, and therefore the somewhat cartoon / bd fantasy style could be the best option, but of other style could match as well. It is also a view of space so the transition from a more human view should not be too general.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     I already mix different style for my game (pixel character / artwork / battlefield) ect which matches well together everything is a question of alchemy.
     
     Image 3 is mostly there to show an overview style that I would like; you are free to use a less detailed style, although this would also be accepted.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  GDnirob

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  I'll do this work, because I love this work. sir please contact me a private chat.

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Do not hesitate to show your talent on this competition it is precisely made so that I can find an artist with a style corresponding to what I am looking for.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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  byteAbug

  • 4 Jahre zuvor

  Hi, can you maybe just explain to me how picture 2 fits in with the city ? Is the city the small star-like circle inside the big circle ? And I suppose purple is the important color ? And you say fantacy - what type - dwarfs, elves, vampires ext. ? What is the game about ?

  • 4 Jahre zuvor
  1. 
     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     The city on image two is seen from the sky, the radiation that we see on the screen represents the crystal that radiates above the tower. The city is therefore in the light on image 2.
     
     As for the area around it represents a kind of dome of light created by the radiation of the crystal, this area serves as a shield and retains the monsters and the corruption that can be heard on the planet which is represented by the purple color on the image.
     
     The game is a fantastic 2D RPG, it talks about the quest for an amnesic character who is looking for his memory in a world under permanent eclipse following an evil spell.
     
     The image that I ask is part of a scene this passer-by before the start of the adventure, it is made to introduce the story it represents the city of the main hero when it was besieged by orders of monster and the " big bad guy "of adventure.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor
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     Wettbewerbs-Inhaber

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

     Basically this is the first image of a sequel that will stage the battle that occurred during the siege of the city and which will lead to the start of the adventure and therefore the start of the game.
     
     As for the races, the city is made up of a people named Lostrimien, they have a physique of human, their only particularities is that they are all blond, and that they glow in the dark, more or less strong according to their state of health.
     
     Do not hesitate to ask other questions.

     • 4 Jahre zuvor

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