I am the lead curriculum editor for Grand Canyon University with over 9 years of experience in editing and proofreading. I am also a writer with over 33 years of experience in nonfiction and fiction genres. I have published two self-help books, one novel, and a collection of short stories, and I have one novel and self-help book in the works.
As a freelance editor, I have edited 18 novels, and several nonfiction works. I will do a thorough edit that includes the following:
* Make or suggest changes in sentence structure and syntax to improve the clarity and flow of the text
* Suggest smooth transitions, especially between paragraphs
* Suggest minor deletions to tighten dialogue
* Suggest minor additions to clarify text
* Point out wordiness, cliches, and jargon
* Check for consistency of tone
* Ensure time, place, name consistency, and logic
* Make suggestions to improve diction, dialogue, character development, and plot structure
I always do a second pass, as it is impossible to catch everything with just one pass. I like to work closely with my authors, asking questions whenever needed and sending progress reports with drafts on long projects. I also do a final proofreading.
Thank you for your consideration,
Wayne H. Purdin