Double sided flyer needs a face lift

Hi See attached herewith the 2 previous versions of a flyer design. That will give you a clear idea of what we are offering. I created the 2nd version because I felt that the first one was too busy. The front page is supposed to grab the attention of the reader in a flash and the back page contains the finer details of what the service supposed to do and why is it better. I m looking for a fresh design of the front page of the flyer. It should use the same verbal content in principal. Although if you have some bright ideas I m open to new suggestion. The product is explained clearly in the flyer – but in the nutshell what we are trying to get across is that we offer a better and cheaper solution than the current expensive and ineffective service. The objective of the flyer is to grab the attention of the reader in a flash and entice potential clients pick up the phone and call us for a presentation of the solution. VERY IMPORTANT ! When bidding for the job please describe in words how you intend face lifting the previous designs or send me a sketch of what you have in mind. If I like your proposal and decide to use it, then the job is yours. I will supply stock pictures / visuals required if reasonably available. My printer required the final version is a CMYK format. Nitzan Tal