Correct a very simple essay

As discussed in the messaging to th eproject you awarded to me, I have placed a bid here for $13.00 to allow for Freelancer to take their minimum $3.00 Regards David

I am a professional editor who can help you make your essay error free and the best it can be. I will correct grammar errors and also look for ways to improve sentence structure and word choice. I have received 5 stars on every project that I have been awarded so you can accept my bid with confidence. Thank you for your consideration.

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Dear Adrian, Your essay has fairly good form. It has a thesis, topic sentences. I teach students at about your level. I would gladly edit the grammatical errors, and I might even point out that you should never start an essay with a sentence that talks about "through the history of humanity" as this is too vague. The rule of thumb is to open with something interesting: a good quote, a statistic, a brief anecdote -- something to catch the reader's attention. I am a professional editor, proof reader, university-level English teacher, with a PhD in English, and I can help you to submit a stronger essay. Can't promise the marks: that is up to your professor's judgment, but I can give you some pointers. Dr. N. Norris (Nanette)

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Hi, I can edit your essay and correct it for spelling and grammatical mistakes and I can start working on it today. I hope that you will consider my bid. I had a look at your essay and I can work on it. Regards, Oomay

Hello, Thank you very much for your job offer. I have read the description, and have the skills necessary for this project. I have taken university-level classes on topics such as English, Documents, Languages, etc. and am a native English speaker with excellent English skills, as shown by the test scores. I have experience doing professional projects in this area. I also enjoy doing this type of work a lot, and always work accurately, carefully, efficiently, and with attention to detail. If you have any other questions, please pm me. Thank you again. Sincerely, Eric Schiefelbein PS: Please tell me how you would like it corrected before you select me, unless it is just proofreading (reading through and correcting spelling and grammar, and sentences that do not make sense).

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Hello! I'm a freelance proofreader, editor and writer with a degree in Humanities (English studies) and 11-year work experience in the field. Clients worldwide trust me with proofreading their research papers, ebooks, website content, reports and pretty much any material that needs a critical eye. I can proofread the essay professionally and send it back in a few hours. Thank you for your time. Respectfully, Nestana

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Hi Adrian, I have already read through the document you posted and I would love to work on improving it for you! In addition to proofreading it for correct spelling and grammar, I would also be happy to suggest some improvements to the writing so that your essay is more convincing. For example, starting off with the 'throughout history' comment sort of waters things down right off the bat - moving this sentence to later on in the paragraph (or even cutting it completely) would make a huge difference. I could even get this done for you in the next few hours. Let me know if you have any questions, and I'll hope to hear from you soon! Cheers, Laura

Hey there. I fixed up the first page. Just wanted to try it out and see if I would be able to do this job. It shouldn't be a problem for me and I can have this back to you in no time. And if you want, I can show you the first page of edits as a sample of my abilities. Let me know if you're interested. Hope I'll hear from you soon!

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